概要： 我的“兄弟”-My “brother” In adults’ eyes , maybe playing computer isn’t a good thing for us pupils , because it’s bad for our eyes . But in my eyes , computer is a precious thing , computer looks like my brother . Because computer can bring me happy if I’m sad , and computer can let me play games if I’m suffocating . So computer lesson is my favourite subject .But , it’s hard to study computer . Because there are many hard parts in it . But I don’t think so . Because the hard things are
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我的“兄弟”-My “brother”
In adults’ eyes , maybe playing computer isn’t a good thing for us pupils , because it’s bad for our eyes . But in my eyes , computer is a precious thing , computer looks like my brother . Because computer can bring me happy if I’m sad , and computer can let me play games if I’m suffocating . So computer lesson is my favourite subject .
But , it’s hard to study computer . Because there are many hard parts in it . But I don’t think so . Because the hard things are more interesting .
If you want to talk something about computer games . I like playing “Stone Age”. Do you like it ? It can let me meet more friends and learn more knowledge .
And then , let’s talk about “Photoshop”, it can make the picture more beautiful .
Computer can help me to do everything . So I like computer.
延伸阅读——英语作文写作技巧
( 1）注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分：说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分：围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分：对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。
（2）确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现
在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。
我的“兄弟”-My “brother”
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