概要: A Bad Dream Fat、short、ugly、with glasses, this is me, a common girl. My biggest trouble is about my body shape. Because I’m too fat. I worry about that all day and all night.“Wow! There’s so much food! Ice-cream! Cake! Chocolate! All my favourite food! Let me eat them!” I eat and eat and eat, don’t feel full at all. But! A bad thing happened! Oh! My body is growing fatter and fatter. Oh, no, my hands, legs, everything become big! Big! Big! I’m very scared. I don’t know what I should
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A Bad Dream
Fat、short、ugly、with glasses, this is me, a common girl. My biggest trouble is about my body shape. Because I’m too fat. I worry about that all day and all night.
“Wow! There’s so much food! Ice-cream! Cake! Chocolate! All my favourite food! Let me eat them!” I eat and eat and eat, don’t feel full at all. But! A bad thing happened! Oh! My body is growing fatter and fatter. Oh, no, my hands, legs, everything become big! Big! Big! I’m very scared. I don’t know what I should do, it’s too fear. I cried……
“Amy! Get up! It’s time to get up!” Mother shouts! Oh, it’s a dream, a bad dream.
I think I must keep fit!
延伸阅读——英语作文写作技巧
( 1)注意篇章结构,合理布局
开始部分:说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分:围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分:对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容。
(2)确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现
在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点:
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。
A Bad Dream
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