概要: A visit I never forget Guess! Where is the photo taken from? Maybe it’s hard for you, because none of my classmates can guess it right. Let me tell you. It was taken in science museum on my last birthday.On my last birthday, I was dreaming a great birthday party and lots of colorful presents from my family and friends, but instead of them. My parents brought me to visit the museum of outer space. It seemed I entered the outer space when I went into the museum. It was dark with a my
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A visit I never forget
Guess! Where is the photo taken from? Maybe it’s hard for you, because none of my classmates can guess it right. Let me tell you. It was taken in science museum on my last birthday.
On my last birthday, I was dreaming a great birthday party and lots of colorful presents from my family and friends, but instead of them. My parents brought me to visit the museum of outer space. It seemed I entered the outer space when I went into the museum. It was dark with a mystic air. I was excited, curious and mixed a little fear, I learned a lot of curious phenomenon there, and read lots of introduction about outer space, which was the most exciting and instructive time I had in my life.
Oh! What a wonderful birthday I had!
延伸阅读——英语作文写作技巧
( 1)注意篇章结构,合理布局
开始部分:说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分:围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分:对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容。
(2)确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现
在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点:
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。
A visit I never forget
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