概要： On a Crowded Bus-挤公车 I am a senior high student who has to commute from home to school every day. It is always an ordeal for me to try to get on a crowded bus. I am often squeezed so hard that I can't breathe. Once I felt someone pushing me very hard, and then he touched my rear. I couldn't turn around to see who did it because I was sandwiched between two tall men. I was so angry that when the bus arrived at my school, I clenched my fists and elbowed my way through the c
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On a Crowded Bus-挤公车
I am a senior high student who has to commute from home to school every day. It is always an ordeal for me to try to get on a crowded bus. I am often squeezed so hard that I can't breathe.
Once I felt someone pushing me very hard, and then he touched my rear. I couldn't turn around to see who did it because I was sandwiched between two tall men. I was so angry that when the bus arrived at my school, I clenched my fists and elbowed my way through the crowd and got off. Then, to my dismay, I found that my purse had been stolen from my school bag.
我是一位每天必须通学的高中生。对我来说，要挤上公车总是一种很痛苦的考验。我常常被挤得喘不过气来。
我一次我觉得有人一直在挤我，然后他摸我屁股。我无法转遛去看是谁做的，因为我被夹在两名长人中间。在公车到达学校时，我气得紧握拳头从人群中挤下车。然后，令我惊慌的是，我发现书包的钱包被偷走了。
延伸阅读——英语作文写作技巧
( 1）注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分：说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分：围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分：对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。
（2）确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现
在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。
On a Crowded Bus-挤公车
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